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Thursday, February 28, 2008

The World Abused by Technology

EAP 2 Writer’s Workshop
Ms Wright
Argumentative Essay
David



The world abused by Technology


All of the world’s people using technology things in anytime and everywhere. Actually, many people are abused by technology things such as cell phones, laptop or desktops, the Internet and so on. Anyone can easily see the people who use technology things when they are working around, study and many other situations. It is already be part of human lives; some people cannot live without technology things. Both adult and children already abuse in technology things. That happen could cause big happen. Everyone in every age is in danger that it might be causes mental problem, health problem and environment problem. People should aware of using technology things for themselves.

First of all, technology could cause mental problem. Most people have their own cell phones and television and using it anytime in everyday. Some of them may not live without those things even 1 hour, it mean like they are already abused in technology things. Most children has abused about video game and cell phone games. They bring it and use it even they are going to rest room. Their lives just focus on the technology stuffs. In this situation, they cannot live like a human. For example of Korea, most of children have their own desktop, MP3, cell phones and video games. They just doing it for their fun it already is their daily habit. They enjoy meet their friends by messenger or talk with cell phones. They are not doing much exercise because of technology things. And some other case, some Korean guys are dead during the computer game. They didn’t eat food well and drink water even sleep. That is not a people’s life almost like an animal. What makes people like that technology things did it? So when people using those things they have to have their own rules for using those things, if they do not want to be like an animal.

Next, it could cause physical problem. It may make people stay inside and easy to tired. It means too much use technology things every single day, it could cause health problem. For example, people’s eyes are easy to dry and also their finger is going to close. Not even those things it may cause many other problems. It says not just about weak or sick people; healthy people could have a same problem. If people not much exercise in outside, they are going to weak. For example, when people do video games at home, they just using their eyes and hands. If this kind of situation is keep going, what happen can you expect next? Also, when people’s are going to weak, they are easy to get a disease because they are weak so their immune about diseases going down. For their healthier life, people have to take care and think differently about technology things.

Third, it is possible to cause environmental problem. If technology is growing up, the earth’s pollute is also growing up. The inventor using lots of nature source for invent something and those happen will cause ecological adaptation. In case of Korea, the frogs and fishes that come from U.S make Korea ecosystem change badly. For example, the frogs eat everything such as native frogs, snakes and large fishes. It is not making a sense, how frogs eat snakes. That happen is not just in Korea, all of the world’s countries may have same problem. Moreover, many animal species will extinct by environment change. People should do something different for our environment. People not live alone, they have to live with our nature and animals, they should remember that.

Many people enjoy surfing the Internet because those things are very convince. So they say, we can save our time with easy way. They can find many information directly, order some stuff what they need and meet friends by messengers. Yes, I also think using the Internet is very convinced but if you use too much time and everything thru the Internet, you could be a geek. However, I think that might make people dumb. People not going to library so their thinking and guessing skill may fall. If they are people they need to use their brains and bodies for them. People need to take care of themselves for living like human.

In conclusion, technology things change the world rapidly. Also it has many beneficial things but many people abuse it in their life. They start their day life with those things and also finish their day life with it. This situation is people not control the technology things, technology things control the people. Too much use technology things will cause mental, physical and environment problem. It is actuality. People need to aware of that problem.

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